Correct or improve the translation of the following English sentences.原文：He walked Susan to the corner and sent his greetings to John, and to Mary, their daughter. 译文：他送苏珊到街口拐弯处，请她向约翰、玛丽和他们的女儿问好。改译：

Correct or improve the translation of the following English sentences.原文：He walked Susan to the corner and sent his greetings to John, and to Mary, their daughter. 译文：他送苏珊到街口拐弯处，请她向约翰、玛丽和他们的女儿问好。改译：

他送苏珊到街口拐弯处，请她向约翰和他们的女儿玛丽问好。