Correct or improve the translation of the following Chinese sentences.原文:国家税收的严重流失,一方面使一部分人的财富迅速加大,另一方面又使国家缺乏必要的再分配能力。 译文: Such heavy losses of revenue have resulted from the rapid wealth accumulation of some people on the one hand, and the in

Correct or improve the translation of the following Chinese sentences.原文:国家税收的严重流失,一方面使一部分人的财富迅速加大,另一方面又使国家缺乏必要的再分配能力。 译文: Such heavy losses of revenue have resulted from the rapid wealth accumulation of some people on the one hand, and the inability of the state to implement a redistribution of wealth on the other.改译:

 SUCH HEAVY LOSSES OF REVENUE HAVE RESULTED IN THE RAPID WEALTH ACCUMULATION OF SOME PEOPLE ON THE ONE HAND, AND THE INABILITY OF THE STATE TO IMPLEMENT A REDISTRIBUTION OF WEALTH ON THE OTHER.