Correct or improve the translation of the following Chinese sentences. 高老师2年前 (2024-03-26)英语翻译(00087)13

Correct or improve the translation of the following Chinese sentences.原文:得到消息后,他高兴地跳起来,拿出纸和笔,给父母留言说自己将去看好朋友。 译文: He heard the news, jumped up with joy, snatched a pen and a piece of paper, wrote his parents a message that he would go to see his good friend.改译:

HEARING THE NEWS, HE JUMPED UP WITH JOY, SNATCHED A PEN AND A PIECE OF PAPER, AND WROTE HIS PARENTS A MESSAGE THAT HE WOULD GO TO SEE HIS GOOD FRIEND.