改进题：Out of the corner of his eye he could see the landscape. It was industrial and at that hour,sad.

译文：在他的眼角之外，还有工业区的风景在很悲伤的那个时候。

改进题：Out of the corner of his eye he could see the landscape. It was industrial and at that hour,sad.

译文：在他的眼角之外，还有工业区的风景在很悲伤的那个时候。

改进的译文：他眼角的余光还能瞥见窗外的景色。这里是工业区，此刻一片萧条景象。