改进题：It was an old woman, tall and shapely still, though withered by time, on which his eyes fell when he stopped and turned.

译文：当他停下来转过身来时，他的目光落在了一个老妇人身上，她身材高大，身材匀称，虽然随着时间的流逝而憔悴。

改进题：It was an old woman, tall and shapely still, though withered by time, on which his eyes fell when he stopped and turned.

译文：当他停下来转过身来时，他的目光落在了一个老妇人身上，她身材高大，身材匀称，虽然随着时间的流逝而憔悴。

改进的译文：他站住，转过身来，定睛一看，原来是个年迈的妇女。她身材修长，虽受岁月的折磨而显憔悴，但风韵犹存。