改进题：I gave my youth to the sea and I came home and gave my wife my old age.

译文：我把青春献给海洋，我回家的时候便把老年给了我的妻子。

改进题：I gave my youth to the sea and I came home and gave my wife my old age.

译文：我把青春献给海洋，我回家的时候便把老年给了我的妻子。

改进的译文：我把青春献给海洋，等我回到家里见到妻子的时候，已经是白发苍苍了。