改进题：A commonplace criticism of American culture is its excessive preoccupation with material goods and corresponding neglect of the human spirit.

译文：人们普遍批评美国文化通过强调对于物质产品的占有而以及过于人们的精神生活的忽视。

改进题：A commonplace criticism of American culture is its excessive preoccupation with material goods and corresponding neglect of the human spirit.

译文：人们普遍批评美国文化通过强调对于物质产品的占有而以及过于人们的精神生活的忽视。

改进的译文：人们普遍批评美国文化过于强调对于物质产品的占有而相应地过于忽视人们的精神生活。