改进题：In the station,a telephone began to ring. The ringing was loud, evenly spaced and unanswered.

译文：在车站里，一个电话响了。 铃声响亮，间隔均匀且无人接听。

改进题：In the station,a telephone began to ring. The ringing was loud, evenly spaced and unanswered.

译文：在车站里，一个电话响了。 铃声响亮，间隔均匀且无人接听。

改进的译文：车站里有一部电话的铃声响了起来。声音很大，节奏均匀，没有人接。