改进题：The improvements of the urban areas, the dramatic change in our skyline will be highly visible to you.

译文：人们随处可以见到四处林立的高楼大厦展示地市区的改善。

改进题：The improvements of the urban areas, the dramatic change in our skyline will be highly visible to you.

译文：人们随处可以见到四处林立的高楼大厦展示地市区的改善。

改进的译文：人们随处可以见到市区的改善，以及四处林立的高楼大厦。