改进题：We should be grateful if you would give us further details of Chinese leather shoes.

译文：能被告知中国皮鞋的其他详情，我们不胜感激。

改进题：We should be grateful if you would give us further details of Chinese leather shoes.

译文：能被告知中国皮鞋的其他详情，我们不胜感激。

改进的译文：如能告知中国皮鞋的其他详情，将不胜感激。