原文：During the industrialization, many British women went to society,joined the work force in the labour market and became independent wage earners. They expanded their sight and built up their sense of independence.
译文：在工业化的浪潮中，许多英国妇女走向社会，加入劳动力市场，

原文：During the industrialization, many British women went to society,joined the work force in the labour market and became independent wage earners. They expanded their sight and built up their sense of independence.
译文：在工业化的浪潮中，许多英国妇女走向社会，加入劳动力市场，成为独立的工薪族。她们扩大了她们的眼界，建立了她们的独立意识。

修改：在工业化的浪潮中，许多英国妇女当时走向社会，走进劳动力市场，成为独立的工薪一族，从而扩大了眼界，增强了独立意识。